Thursday, December 16, 2010

If you want to view it click here.
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  1. Mr. T. JohnstonMarch 5, 2011 at 12:51 PM

    Sema,
    On your blog, let people know what they will see if they “click here”.
    Make your own title for your description.
    There are some sentence structure/word choice/omitted words issues.
    Overall, you have used some very good descriptive words and phrases, especially with the physical description. Your paragraphs are organized well.
    20/25

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